发布时间：2006-11-12 12:16:55确、顺畅,不能前后矛盾、颠三例四。
例1:Under this pressure their whole way of life, even if their bodies, became radically changed.
该句中的if是误用,even if 后边只有their bodies是半句话,"即使他们的身体";只有把if删除,even their bodies"就连他们的身体"这样才可以与前边的短语构成复合主语表示他们的生活方式和身体状态都得以发生巨变。
例2:When U.S. soldiers came home after the World War II, for example, they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was a tremendous boom in home building. (CET-6,9.03)
此句前后应该是递进关系,但是原文却用了but,使整个复合句成了转折关系,也使读者无法理解其意。故应该把But改成And。
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